Priority diagnosis
The five conversion blockers most likely to confuse, weaken trust, or interrupt an enquiry.
One homepage. One clear enquiry path.
Your website may look respectable and still make a potential customer work too hard to understand what you do, why they should trust you, and what to do next.
I turn one unclear service-business homepage into sharper messaging and a clearer enquiry journey — delivered within 24 hours of complete intake.
What lands in your inbox
You receive the diagnosis, finished replacement copy and the visual direction needed to act on it. The fixed price includes one revision round.
The five conversion blockers most likely to confuse, weaken trust, or interrupt an enquiry.
A finished headline, supporting line and primary call to action.
Finished replacement copy for the parts of your homepage that need it most.
One desktop hero mockup showing how the improved hierarchy can work.
Ready-to-post ideas for Google Business Profile or Instagram using the sharper positioning.
One revision round for factual corrections and small wording changes.
UNCOMMISSIONED CONCEPT — FICTIONAL BUSINESS
This example uses an invented cleaning company. It demonstrates the deliverable structure only and is not client work or performance evidence.
N&P Cleaning
Welcome to our website
We provide a wide range of professional cleaning solutions. Contact us today for more information.
Generic promise · no location · no useful next step
Independent home cleaning · Bristol
Reliable weekly and fortnightly home cleaning, matched to one small local team.
✓ Insured ✓ Same regular cleaner ✓ No long contract
Specific customer · clear outcome · lower-friction action
How it works
Tell me the service to prioritise and the enquiry you want customers to make.
I check that a homepage rescue is the right tool. If it is, you receive the fixed £99 payment request.
The 24-hour clock starts when payment and the required business facts are both confirmed.
A deliberately small service
Straight answers
No. You receive a concise PDF, editable replacement copy and a visual hero direction. You or your web provider can implement them.
No. The work improves clarity, trust and the path to enquiry based on the public page and facts you supply. Commercial results also depend on traffic, demand, pricing and execution.
When payment is confirmed and the short intake is complete: URL, priority service, target customer, enquiry goal and verified business proof.
The price includes one correction round for factual errors and small wording changes. A new strategy, service or page is a separate scope.
Start with the page you already have
No sales call is required. If the homepage is already clear, or needs a different kind of work, I will say so before payment.
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